2010-06-28 [Goma]: I started and wound up getting too far so I couldn't fit her all on the paper so I'm honestly just as curious Chel o.o

2010-06-30 [NOOOPE]: She's got a cool expression, but I've gotta go with what everyone else is saying. If I have time, I'll do a redline.

2010-07-13 [Aeolynn]: Perspective seems a little off... but I like her hands! Very well done

2010-08-07 [Goma]: New

2010-08-09 [pegasus1000]: Sickle + dragon claws + spiked armor = A bit over kill
I really like this one.
+ The shadowy affect is great
+ The cocky look on the right guys face is awesome.
+ I really like the 2D – 3D feel to the whole pic.
- The guy to left, the eyes on seem hollow. Or unfinished
~ The hair on the guy to the right is cool but I am wondering if you might want to add some highlights so it would seem on the same level as the nose or at least covering the eyes. But again I think it is cool as is so it would be up to you if you chose to experiment some more.

2010-08-09 [Goma]: The armor has been part of his design for ages xD the claws were an after thought o.o

This one was my first real experiment with silhouettes and the like and I think it turned out wonderful I had the one on the rights face showing when I first did it but it made him look a bit too sinister so I adjusted my shading and what not.

2010-08-09 [Chel.]: Very cool, graphic quality! :3
My crit is that the guy on the left's right hand seems a bit... broken? :P

2010-08-09 [Goma]: you mean the hand on your right...right?

2010-08-09 [Chel.]: Yes, the hand in center of the piece...holding the sickle.

2010-08-09 [Goma]: the problem being its a silhouette so you can 't see his thumb,the hand is more so resting on the sickle than anything

2010-10-01 [Goma]: new

2010-10-01 [Eyonic]: *wants more color!*

2010-10-01 [Chel.]: Oh yes!
Color would be wonderful. It might help one be able to tell what those circle things are. At the moment, they kinda look like random spheres....or dragon eggs?

2010-10-01 [Ravendust]: I agree with [Chel.] and [Eyonic] - color would really bring out this piece. Right now there really is no depth, its nicely drawn but it doesn't totally draw me in if you know what I mean.

2010-10-01 [Goma]: I'm not so great with color,I can do eyes and thats about it.. but to clarify they are kinda like crystal balls xD

2010-10-02 [pegasus1000]: agrees with above statement of color. Line drawings are nice but if there is no texture then that is all it will ever be. If color gives you trouble then go with black and white and bits of color.

2010-10-02 [Aeolynn]: I'm having a hard time figuring out whats going on in the pic, but that is probably just me lol

2010-10-02 [Chel.]: No, I know what you mean...

2010-10-02 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: Anatomy could use a bit of work, but it's a pretty good piece over all. Like [Aeolynn] said, it is a bit confusing, but I think that's just due to the fact that it's just line art at the moment.

2010-10-02 [Goma]: for a bit more clarification the Dragon is foreshadowing and the tail is actually his (only half the dragon is even on the paper o,o)

2010-10-03 [Pnelma Tirian]: It looks great! The composition flows pretty nicely. Maybe give his spine a little more curve so it doesn't seem like he's got a super short torso. You could probably get away with just throwing some tones in there. :D